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Kit Karlsson's avatar

This is such a compelling read. I like the fact that you jump straight into the action without a lot of messy exposition. Also, I learned a new word (melismatic). And I really like the pacing of the action versus the inner narrative with Sera. Plus the sword fight just feels very realistic. I feel like this is a very unique kind of storytelling (fast-paced action, vivid prose, multiple narrative structures, dark humor, a little bit of body horror) that you wouldn't normally see in a fantasy story (if that is roughly the right genre) and I am so here for it.

Anyway sorry for the paragraph but I just really enjoyed this and now I have to read the rest of it.

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Tom Schecter's avatar

This is very, very good.

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