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Lila's avatar

oooo this is very neat. i'm drawn to your writing style and i can't wait to read more when i can.

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Alex Shifman's avatar

Really like the authorial move of creating a mental character! Really cool how you made Eathel’s internal monologue a dialogue. It pulls me along as a reader, giving me so much more than exposition. Respect!

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Sam Liebl's avatar

Thank you very very much. I appreciate that. I hope you’ll let me know what you think of subsequent chapters.

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Alex Shifman's avatar

Gladly!

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Colin Wood's avatar

Can't wait for next Chapter

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Sam Liebl's avatar

God @substack needs better navigation tools ASAP. It's in the Table of Contents. https://stack.samliebl.com/p/table-of-contents

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Colin Wood's avatar

Are you on tonight?

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