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Prince of Permsia's avatar

Overall, a good story. I found your protagonist's interactions with Sera to be especially well done. An almost sibling-like dynamic. I can't quite figure out what she is, but I suppose that will be explained in future chapters.

You gave me a fantasy name overload at first, but I was able to settle in.

I really wish you would give us a map. I at least have a hard time visualizing locations based on names alone.

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Elaine's avatar

I finally made my way through after interacting with you during your live the other day! I'm really enjoying your work- it's very compelling. ♡

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