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Lila's avatar

oooo this is very neat. i'm drawn to your writing style and i can't wait to read more when i can.

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Alex Shifman's avatar

Really like the authorial move of creating a mental character! Really cool how you made Eathel’s internal monologue a dialogue. It pulls me along as a reader, giving me so much more than exposition. Respect!

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